Parent Comment: Should the first layer top be a polyprop top - this will keep the sweat away from the skin and stop cotton t-shirt feeling wet and maybe cold? The collared shirt is a good idea to protect from sunburn - sun at altitude is stronger and harsher. The crossing is a huge walk - I have done it and have great respect for anyone who completes it.
Hey Geordie that's a great slideshow I liked how you put the picture of amreen and a picture from the internet with an explanation. You could improve by maybe making the slideshow a little bit slower as I could not read all of it before the side changed.Check out my blog at:http://ssisabellar.blogspot.co.nz/
Well done Geordie, I liked the way you included the pictures of Amrene and also the arrows with the other pictures this made it nice and clear. The only thing I noticed was no full stops so if added this would be perfect.Come check out my blog at http://sssamp.blogspot.co.nz/ Cheers Sam
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ReplyDeleteShould the first layer top be a polyprop top - this will keep the sweat away from the skin and stop cotton t-shirt feeling wet and maybe cold? The collared shirt is a good idea to protect from sunburn - sun at altitude is stronger and harsher. The crossing is a huge walk - I have done it and have great respect for anyone who completes it.
Hey Geordie that's a great slideshow I liked how you put the picture of amreen and a picture from the internet with an explanation. You could improve by maybe making the slideshow a little bit slower as I could not read all of it before the side changed.Check out my blog at:http://ssisabellar.blogspot.co.nz/
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DeleteWell done Geordie, I liked the way you included the pictures of Amrene and also the arrows with the other pictures this made it nice and clear. The only thing I noticed was no full stops so if added this would be perfect.Come check out my blog at http://sssamp.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteCheers Sam
Thank you
DeleteHi Geordie,
ReplyDeleteNice work I love the detail and creativity in this piece of work.
Tamzin R
Hi Goerdie,
ReplyDeleteGreat work, I reckon you have put in a lot of effort to do this.
Thanks
Jordan
Hi, I Enjoyed reading your survival layers slide show.
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